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episode 1, page 7

Transcript:

panel 1: An elf greets the donkey cart driver as they ride into town. Valentine: "Ah, Gianluca, good morning! How was the ride up?" Gianluca (the cart driver): "Good to see you, Valentine! Not too bad!"

panel 2: The basbeo sneaks an apple from the back of the cart, rolling his eyes at the pleasantries. Gianluca: "Good ole Bonnie didn't stop the whole way up! And we didn't have any wheel problems, now that we got 'em fixed up by that short fellow!"

panel 3: The basbeo goes to take a big bite out of the apple. Valentine (off-screen): "He does have his uses... I SUPPOSE.."

panel 4: Valentine continues: "Still, I wouldn't hang around him much. You know the stories." This piques the basbeo's interest. He pauses to listen in. Gianluca: "They can't REALLY be true, though."

panel 5: The basbeo peeks around the cart at the two gossipers. Bonnie the donkey looks at the apple he is holding. Valentine (off-screen): "You weren't there when he started lurking around! All wild-eyed, hair-matted, shouting nonsense at anyone passing by."

4 thoughts on “episode 1, page 7

  1. There must be a reasonable explanation.

    1. noooo i’m sure he’s just evil probably

  2. Yes, Bon, give Bonnie a peace of your fine apple!

  3. Transcript:

    A black haired elf faces the arriving carriage outside a building.
    “Ah, Gianluca, good morning!”
    GIANLUCA: “good to see you, Valentine!”
    VALENTINE: “how was the ride up?”
    GIANLUCA: “not too bad!”
    The hooded elf steps down from the back of the cart holding an apple.
    GIANLUCA: “Good ole Bonnie didn’t stop the whole way up!
    and we didn’t have any wheel problems now that we got ’em fixed up by that short fellow!”
    The unnamed elf starts to take a bite from the apple.
    (out of panel) VALENTINE: “he does have his uses…
    I SUPPOSE.”
    He stops to listen.
    (out of panel) VALENTINE: “still, I wouldn’t hang around him much.
    you know the stories”
    (out of panel) GIANLUCA: “they can’t REALLY be true though…”
    Bonnie the donkey takes an interest in the apple.
    (out of panel) VALENTINE: “you weren’t there when he started lurking around!
    all wild-eyed, hair-matted, shouting nonsense at anyone passing by.”

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